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Hello dears! I'm very sorry, but we must hold for a moment.. I have written a poem on If I were in charge of the world. It's truly how I invision the world as 'peaceful'. It's a simple poem. There was a exsample, so don't think this was completly oringial. I will be proud of it, even though I could do better. Here it is :

If I ruled the world,
No body would need money.
Everything would be infinite,
It wouldn't be funny.

If I ruled the world,
Everyone would play.
Learn by book,
Having fun by day.

If I ruled the world,
Everyone would have a computer.
Play and learn it all,
Never wasting money on a tutor.

If I ruled the world,
Age wouldn't matter.
We'd all be equal,
Never be sadder.

That's all for today! Bye for now!!

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