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Step One : Hooking your readers

Hello, my fellow unicorns ♡! Today we'll work on the first part of your stories. The hook!! A hook needs to be something that just HOOKS your reader so much they need more. If you'd like, I will share a hook from one of the stories I'm working on...

When you see me, you might think I'm normal. But then, you hear a moo, or any animal sound. You might look around, thinking some one's being silly, or a animal is around. You see no animals, and almost no one's around. All you find is a cute little family, with a daughter, and you shake your head, thinking your mind is playing tricks on you. But then there's another moo...

That's all I'm sharing from my hook. But you got hooked, and you want more, don't you 😎? Hehe! A hook should give you that feeling, like you do not only want more, you NEED more. A good way to get inspired is to read your favorite book, and never read past the first chapter. That's a good exsample, but don't do it so much you've memorized the begining. 

That's all today, my little unicorns! I shall see you next time!

TA-TA♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡!

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